Wow!! Thank you for your hard work. What a long and imaginative story. I can't believe you can pen up such detailed setting, machines terminology and what-not. I like that you build the story in just the right pace, and keep the characters of each member close to the original. My favorite part is when you describe Nino's attraction to Sho is like getting sucked up to a black hole, and that Sho's charm is a strong gravity pulling him, that's just so romantic. Two thumbs up and a big ovation for you!
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yati
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Date: 2016-07-03 05:14 am (UTC)What a long and imaginative story.
I can't believe you can pen up such detailed setting, machines terminology and what-not.
I like that you build the story in just the right pace, and keep the characters of each member close to the original.
My favorite part is when you describe Nino's attraction to Sho is like getting sucked up to a black hole, and that Sho's charm is a strong gravity pulling him, that's just so romantic.
Two thumbs up and a big ovation for you!