This fic deserves so many more comments than it has! I know the fandom is perhaps dwindling some...but... jesus fuck. THIS is the kind of fic I remember reading when I first joined. It's the kind of story that sticks in your head and you can mull it over and smile about again and again.

I very especially loved your characterization of Mister Marvelous. His perfection, his quick anger, his sexy, sexy pinning of Nino to the door....

Ohno was wonderful, and I think the fic was stronger for your use of him as the main character. Everything you did was just so spot on!