Spine-chilling!!! Maru Maru... I thought u'd been able to escape. Poor Yoko. I must say I'm a little confused w the ending: did Maru already key in his code (and Yoko therefore able to escape)? Or that Yoko (even though no second passcode) chose to reseal himself into yet another Box setting?
I love how u write suspense, letting it ratchet itself further, tighter the more the tale unfolds. Ah... Wouldnt have been shocked if there'd be a mad, Wii-wielding Nino in there somewhere, but glad for Sho's n Ohno's inclusion. So right n so wrong that Oh-chan was still still so fixated on fish n art in the last moments.
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Date: 2012-11-18 05:20 am (UTC)I love how u write suspense, letting it ratchet itself further, tighter the more the tale unfolds. Ah... Wouldnt have been shocked if there'd be a mad, Wii-wielding Nino in there somewhere, but glad for Sho's n Ohno's inclusion. So right n so wrong that Oh-chan was still still so fixated on fish n art in the last moments.
Hugs to Jaime! ❤❤❤