When I was reading this, it was like I was watching a 2-hour SP - so magical, colorful and wonderfully written :D
Becky is crazy. And I love how you made her into this odd witch but is impossible to hate even in her ridiculous rainbow cloak :D
Nino is AMAZING XD The sign changes into something funny every time (although nothing beats my laugh at the Sex God and Private Investigator - SO APPROPRIATE XD) And his frienemy relationship with Becky is just adorable ♥
Sho in my book is one of those essentially boring characters in the beginning but will get your heart in the end. I think he won me with his soothing handkerchief he gave Becky even when she just shoved him in her closet. *A*
Jun is this perfectionist manager minus the sadistic diva side. He is being tortured in exchange because of carefree Aiba. XD Its a bit sad that we didn't see much from him.
Aiba is...Aiba. I have no words for this guy since its just very him. Although I did feel pity when he was already in his cupcake-addict state.
And Yuriko. Unlike others I was amused by your portrayal of her the most. She is really capable of these evil roles and I could just feel the hunger for fame when she snapped.
I LOVE THIS FIC and I'm going to read your other lengthy ones :D
P.S. OHNO PLEASE BE AS TALKATIVE AS THIS AMAZING, BEER-DRINKING, PERVERT GHOST. (I unexpectedly laughed at that moment when I shouldn't have. Damn Becky and her unexpectedly shocking memories)
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Date: 2012-04-30 10:48 am (UTC)Becky is crazy. And I love how you made her into this odd witch but is impossible to hate even in her ridiculous rainbow cloak :D
Nino is AMAZING XD The sign changes into something funny every time (although nothing beats my laugh at the Sex God and Private Investigator - SO APPROPRIATE XD) And his frienemy relationship with Becky is just adorable ♥
Sho in my book is one of those essentially boring characters in the beginning but will get your heart in the end. I think he won me with his soothing handkerchief he gave Becky even when she just shoved him in her closet. *A*
Jun is this perfectionist manager minus the sadistic diva side. He is being tortured in exchange because of carefree Aiba. XD Its a bit sad that we didn't see much from him.
Aiba is...Aiba. I have no words for this guy since its just very him. Although I did feel pity when he was already in his cupcake-addict state.
And Yuriko. Unlike others I was amused by your portrayal of her the most. She is really capable of these evil roles and I could just feel the hunger for fame when she snapped.
I LOVE THIS FIC and I'm going to read your other lengthy ones :D
P.S. OHNO PLEASE BE AS TALKATIVE AS THIS AMAZING, BEER-DRINKING, PERVERT GHOST. (I unexpectedly laughed at that moment when I shouldn't have. Damn Becky and her unexpectedly shocking memories)