Amazing!!! I love the way you describe Jun through Ohno's eyes and how Ohno is just... Ohno. And your writing is so cinematographic... I was almost there, following Ohno, walking day after day with that bag... His feelings of uneasiness while rumaging through the belongings of someone dead... Almost smell Jun's cigarrettes and sense his distress... Thank you for a beautiful story and for telling it to us so beautifuly :D
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