This was really interesting to read. I really like your characterization of Ohno. He's worried about returning the belongings to the right people even if he isn't sure to how to go about doing so. He's quietly determined in a sense. I love the interactions between him and Jun as well. They're both reserved at first since Jun is grieving, but Ohno's determination is what gave him closure (that line about the airline offering to compensate them for the loss of the suitcase was kind of heart-wrenching). The kiss was perfect, not too much, just simple but full of so many possibilities...this time I think it was Jun who was quietly determined and wanted Ohno to make the decision himself.
Those are my feelings in regards to this story. It was lovely and you definitely rose to the occasion!
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
yati
no subject
Date: 2011-11-24 01:32 am (UTC)Those are my feelings in regards to this story. It was lovely and you definitely rose to the occasion!