i really enjoyed this! i like how much care sho puts into taking care of ohno, and how it is obviously appreciated. i also like the world you've created, where ohno is a leader in his own way even if it is unsatisfying to those who want a more forthright, leaderly-leader. that feeling of the distinct roles they are each supposed to fill - and the ways they transgress them - is cool.

p.s. nice monty python reference. XD