Aw, that was such a cute little story. I can't think of anything besides humor with this royal pair, but you did a good job. :) In fact I'd love to see more, with pirate!Aiba and maybe a little more angst on Sho's part? Or happiness with Ohno? :)

But even if there's no more, I really liked this! Sho's feelings for Ohno were so sweet. :) Thank you!