ext_308989 ([identity profile] asaphira-sachi.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] astrangestorm 2011-07-16 10:07 am (UTC)

OMG. Even after a week, I'm still pretty high from the epi, and this is a definite pleasant read in every way.

I love the 'verse' you created based on it, and how mutual the Yama couple's relationship is written. With just a few sentences, we get to know King Ohno's nature and background, how his kindness is his ruling, how we get to feel the unconditional love Sho has for him, how Sho softens for Ohno. I especially love how you included the non-verbal communication that's so characteristic of Yama: the connection where Ohno's pent-up frustration of the crown is expressed through his tension in bed w/ Sho, and it's mutually understood between them.

I know you usually don't write this pairing, so thank you very much for doing so ♥

PS: Pirate Aiba had me giggle even if he's only in few lines.

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting