so i've been having a rough couple of days when i stumbled upon bubbly's marvelous things. after reading it, i saw that she left a comment to someone else linking to your aibecky fics.
i'm so glad she did.
this story was just LOVELY. i like how instead of a flashback scene, you tell us what happens right in the beginning. i think it makes a story flow better that way. and i love how aiba-chan was an inventor and then a 'cowardly lion'-esque beast and the boys were steel-faced (pun unintended) automatons. it just makes showing their true selves are the more whimsical and beautiful and fantastic. becky was spot-on. everyone was spot-on in characterization. flawless, really. and i know someone else already said this, but i'm glad that becky and aiba-chan took time to fall in love. while i love disney movies, that's one flaw they have, i think.
when i reached the end, i felt a warmth engulf me. so thank you for writing and sharing this with everyone (and for a good cause, no less!). really, thank you. ♥
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i'm so glad she did.
this story was just LOVELY. i like how instead of a flashback scene, you tell us what happens right in the beginning. i think it makes a story flow better that way. and i love how aiba-chan was an inventor and then a 'cowardly lion'-esque beast and the boys were steel-faced (pun unintended) automatons. it just makes showing their true selves are the more whimsical and beautiful and fantastic. becky was spot-on. everyone was spot-on in characterization. flawless, really. and i know someone else already said this, but i'm glad that becky and aiba-chan took time to fall in love. while i love disney movies, that's one flaw they have, i think.
when i reached the end, i felt a warmth engulf me. so thank you for writing and sharing this with everyone (and for a good cause, no less!). really, thank you. ♥