THIS. This piece. I can't even explain it in words because I've put this off this morning knowing it'd be epic and finished reading everything in one sitting and now I've been staring at this comment box for half an hour now, trying to make a coherent, constructive, non-too-flaily review. But just like how Aiba's swept Becky off her feet with his kindness and ingenuity and his being Aiba, the way you wrote this humongous fic has left me speechless. The tone, the manner of speaking, the characterisation -- so terrifically fitting and spot-on.
I'm not the requester but I'm so happy you offered to write a fic in exchange of aid. Totally going down to my faves and memories. Thanks for sharing your talent, and for a good cause!
P.S.: I cried when Sho 'died'. And then Nino. And then--oh gawd, I really thought it was just going to be Aiba and Becky having their happy ending but I love you and your love of Arashi. ♥
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THIS. This piece. I can't even explain it in words because I've put this off this morning knowing it'd be epic and finished reading everything in one sitting and now I've been staring at this comment box for half an hour now, trying to make a coherent, constructive, non-too-flaily review. But just like how Aiba's swept Becky off her feet with his kindness and ingenuity and his being Aiba, the way you wrote this humongous fic has left me speechless. The tone, the manner of speaking, the characterisation -- so terrifically fitting and spot-on.
I'm not the requester but I'm so happy you offered to write a fic in exchange of aid. Totally going down to my faves and memories. Thanks for sharing your talent, and for a good cause!
P.S.: I cried when Sho 'died'. And then Nino. And then--oh gawd, I really thought it was just going to be Aiba and Becky having their happy ending but I love you and your love of Arashi. ♥