I was cackling the entire time I read this; you have a hilarious knack for detail (and a knack for hilarious details). Everything from Jun's absurdly unpronounceable wine to Grandma Sakurai's lovingly knitted sweaters to Sho's wisdom teeth in a jar/housewife porn being (probably) stashed somewhere in the closet just cracked me up. And the balance between the sexual tension and how it was resolved and Jun's utter anxiety about the fake jeans was brilliantly written.
TL;DR You are fabulous; your writing is fabulous; happy birthday Sho ♥
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Date: 2011-01-26 06:13 am (UTC)I was cackling the entire time I read this; you have a hilarious knack for detail (and a knack for hilarious details). Everything from Jun's absurdly unpronounceable wine to Grandma Sakurai's lovingly knitted sweaters to Sho's wisdom teeth in a jar/housewife porn being (probably) stashed somewhere in the closet just cracked me up. And the balance between the sexual tension
and how it was resolvedand Jun's utter anxiety about the fake jeans was brilliantly written.TL;DR You are fabulous; your writing is fabulous; happy birthday Sho ♥