I totally read this the other day at work and forgot to comment, so hurrrr be a comment!
Love love love Becky as Sho's wife. Your characterization of her is lovely. I consistently enjoy how you mix in the other members of the group as side characters. Aiba as the butler is A+.
The angst of the Sho/Nino is what killed me omg. I was worried because stories like this never end happily and I LIKE HAPPY ENDINGS. D: Like the Executive Assistant series, which as you may guess is one of my favorites (not just for the porn >.>), but I knew from the first one it couldn't end happily. XD; YET I KEEP READING. WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEEEE?
Anywhoodles, I love the setting and the pacing of the dialogue, specifically. It reads very smoothly. Bravo, madame, as usual. :Db
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Date: 2010-04-28 11:25 am (UTC)Love love love Becky as Sho's wife. Your characterization of her is lovely. I consistently enjoy how you mix in the other members of the group as side characters. Aiba as the butler is A+.
The angst of the Sho/Nino is what killed me omg. I was worried because stories like this never end happily and I LIKE HAPPY ENDINGS. D: Like the Executive Assistant series, which as you may guess is one of my favorites (not just for the porn >.>), but I knew from the first one it couldn't end happily. XD; YET I KEEP READING. WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEEEE?
Anywhoodles, I love the setting and the pacing of the dialogue, specifically. It reads very smoothly. Bravo, madame, as usual. :Db